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Just want to say, since this is something I've seen a lot with other comics/graphics novels online, please don't ask why something is like /this/ or what's gonna happen next, I will explain all. Feel free to ask about less obvious things and check if I AM going to later explain it, it is possible that it's something I may have overlooked it.

I think it's fair to say Mayke, he wasn't.

Honestly, that Ice Punch wouldn't have hurt Nuria, but the poor thing isn't used to attacks like that, she's used to Elm's Totodile and Chikorita with their normal starter attacks, she's just startled.

Double spread with a painting, I am so out of practice with this, sorry if they're off model XD Cloud has a bit of Josh's facial shape in that last panel.

It occurs to me, that Mayke is missing his gloves in a few pages, I'll go back and fix that.

Back to the square speech bubbles.


_{This comic is considered Mature by DCPA standards meaning:
Mature (M): Gore, Strong Language, Nudity, and also any yaoi/yuri comics should be rated "mature".
There will be /some/ swearing later, blood and gore (wounds etc... I'll be avoiding gratuitous gore). No nudity as far as I can foresee (unless you consider a dude in his boxes /nudity/ or just semi-nudity).
I don't consider this to be a yaoi or yuri comic, however a gay relationship does play an important role in the story, I won't be laying it on thick, I don't wish to alienate any of my readers and I don’t want it to be the focus of the whole thing.}


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